XenonMonkey's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Day at the beach.]

Uhh...

I honestly couldn't understand what was going on throughout the video. It seems like an old machinima video with poor voice acting.

I think putting more effort into clearer voice acting would help, but this was done so poorly that I can't tell if you're a joking or not. I'll give you some credit for whatever effort you put into it, but it was still pretty bad overall.

[A painting being made]

Alright for a beginner.

Your 'artwork' isn't exactly something to be desired, I liked your process of drawing, but I'd like to share a little tip with you to help you improve it.

If you draw the completed image to start off with, erase a little bit, create a new keyframe, erase some more, and then continue this process until you're back to a blank canvas, you can highlight every keyframe, and right click, then select "Reverse keyframes" for a smoother drawing effect.

If you didn't understand what I meant, check this out for a video tutorial about what I mean:

http://www.tutorialized.com/view/tuto rial/The-hand-writing-effect/11488

amcbub responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'll try to improve if I do something like this again.

[Dinosaur RAWR!]

Very cute.

It's a cute little animation, but it's still very short, and poorly animated. Not to mention the fact that it's outline still has a couple white pixels from wherever you cropped it.

Otherwise, it was very nice with the calming background and background music. You even managed to make the dinosaurs roar fit the calm background music.

Not bad, but it needs improvement.

sweet110588 responds:

es muy lindo
es una linda y pequeña animación,pero es muy corta y mal animada
por no mencionar que aun tiene unos pixeles blancos en los lugares donde se recorta

es muy agradable el escenario tranquilo y la música de fondo incluso te las arreglaste para hacer el rugido del dinosaurio encajan bien con la calmante música de fondo

no esta mal pero necesitas mejorar

thanks for watching
but the cleaning process in pictures is very tedious

also the emotion my first animation :3
I did not care much those little details

I saw only I said not so bad
so it load directly to newgrounds ja ja ja XD

thanks for your time

[Folding Cranes]

Great Job!

You seem to have a good feel for the fluidity of this animation, not to mention how trippy you could make the video seem in a matter of seconds not only using the colors and animation, but with the background music as well.

TheBoogley responds:

We aim to sneeze... I mean please :3

[Dem Parodeez - 4]

Clearly the best series on Newgrounds.

By anyone's standards.

[Mario is Gay 1]

Truly Amazing

The impeccable voice acting complemented by the smooth, clear animation makes up one of the greatest flashes I've seen this year!