XenonMonkey's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A painting being made]

Alright for a beginner.

Your 'artwork' isn't exactly something to be desired, I liked your process of drawing, but I'd like to share a little tip with you to help you improve it.

If you draw the completed image to start off with, erase a little bit, create a new keyframe, erase some more, and then continue this process until you're back to a blank canvas, you can highlight every keyframe, and right click, then select "Reverse keyframes" for a smoother drawing effect.

If you didn't understand what I meant, check this out for a video tutorial about what I mean:

http://www.tutorialized.com/view/tuto rial/The-hand-writing-effect/11488

amcbub responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'll try to improve if I do something like this again.

[Dinosaur RAWR!]

Very cute.

It's a cute little animation, but it's still very short, and poorly animated. Not to mention the fact that it's outline still has a couple white pixels from wherever you cropped it.

Otherwise, it was very nice with the calming background and background music. You even managed to make the dinosaurs roar fit the calm background music.

Not bad, but it needs improvement.

sweet110588 responds:

es muy lindo
es una linda y pequeña animación,pero es muy corta y mal animada
por no mencionar que aun tiene unos pixeles blancos en los lugares donde se recorta

es muy agradable el escenario tranquilo y la música de fondo incluso te las arreglaste para hacer el rugido del dinosaurio encajan bien con la calmante música de fondo

no esta mal pero necesitas mejorar

thanks for watching
but the cleaning process in pictures is very tedious

also the emotion my first animation :3
I did not care much those little details

I saw only I said not so bad
so it load directly to newgrounds ja ja ja XD

thanks for your time

[Fun Fun Fun Fun Fun Fun]

It's alright.

There seems to be a lack of animation, in which you decided to recycle most of the brief animated segments. Maybe putting a bit more variety into your animation would be for the best.

I know you probably didn't write or perform the song you animated, I can't mark you down for my distaste for the music. However it seems like you were a bit lazy in lip-syncing, which is sort of inexcusable because of how short the song is. Not bad overall though.

rconan17 responds:

Thanks for you feedbad! I'll try to make better videos next time. =)

[When Animators Are Bored.]

Agh.

0 for shitty animation and shitty, overused, music.

Manmancarlwaa responds:

Overused?
I Hardly Ever Hear This Song >_>

[Folding Cranes]

Great Job!

You seem to have a good feel for the fluidity of this animation, not to mention how trippy you could make the video seem in a matter of seconds not only using the colors and animation, but with the background music as well.

TheBoogley responds:

We aim to sneeze... I mean please :3

[Ducktails Adventure 5]

Sorry for offending you.

Don't hate on me bro.

livelavalive responds:

i think your a pretty cool bro actually, hopefully youll like the next one

[Ducktails Adventure 4]

COME ON MAN!

BRING BACK THE DUCKTAILS THEME SONG!

livelavalive responds:

k next episode

[clock revenge 2010!!]

What Happened?

I blinked and missed it.

insolute200 responds:

...but don t put me a 0.

[EJR Makes a Flash]

I never knew

Designing a flash could be this fun!

HighWay responds:

I had a blast acting in it too! :D

[Awesome Caramelldansen!]

Well...

It IS the best CaramellDansen I've ever seen...

Xenondwarf responds:

WHY THANK YOU!